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« on: July 24, 2007, 03:14:48 PM »

Would love some feedback, bad or good it's all welcome Wink


Of course we have salt
Where are the trees
The land is farmed
As far as the eye can see

The land is farmed
For you and me
The land is farmed
For money and greed

We think about it occasionally
Say the problems too small to see

Soon the salt of the land
Will meet the salt of the sea

Soon the salt of the land
Will meet the salt of the sea

Soon the salt of the land
Will meet the salt of the sea

Our Time Is Burning


I am winter
But despite popular opinion
Iím the days that shine
When the clouds are gone
And the warmth comes thru
And you see straight thru me
And iím naked with you
Even thought iím clothed
I took so much care
I really wanted to know you
But i knew our time was burning
Once the spark is set
Thereís only one way the flames are going
Just like my thoughts travelling below the belly
I couldnít give you what you wanted
I havenít got it for myself yet
But i know i should be in a hurry
For i know our time is burning

I wish i had told you so
Iím thinking as an old man
I wish 40 years ago
I just simply said hello
For now i know our time is burning


Now spring is near
And all the moss is burning
Only my tears they receive
O Hurry that time is near
I cannot breathe the air no more
Our time is burning
It cannot last to Summerís day
Oh and the poisons set
And i cannot fulfil
I am inept
Oh our time has just burnt through
That last flicker was a thought of you

Sunrise 6am

Thereís a soft cotton sunrise
Leaving Perth behind
Clouds covering forgotten scars
The same thing we did on Mars

Colours are dreams on painters pallets
Golden pinks and scarlet chromes
Iím leaviní home
Iím leaviní home

The farmers leases
Look like jigsaw pieces
The clouds hide some
Breath taking view
Now golden sun

Famous Faces

Sitting here with famous faces
Donít recognise some of them
Some have been in my dreams
Some inside my mind

Itís surreal
Itís sublime
Did I use these words correctly
Iím not too sure
You can make up your mind

Iím sitting here at this very point in time
Smiling, Smiling, Smiling
Because today I met
Zappa, Zorn, Barrett, Meek, Daniel Johnston
The Shags, Tim & Son, Oliver with the stepping stone
And certainly not last I found Faust

Thereís many more V.I.Ps
This list was pulled randomly
If you want to learn
Have a real listen to these

Open your mind, transcend musically
This is talent not genius
Itís just most never get to see
See music, see it when itís real
Most afraid there would be a tear
This list was pulled out randomly
From a source sub-consciously

Thanks for reading Smiley
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« Reply #1 on: July 31, 2007, 06:25:17 PM »

**** 56 views & not one reply, I didnt think they were that bad Sad
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« Reply #2 on: August 07, 2007, 05:45:22 PM »

Love the lyrics for Salt and Our Time is Burning. I did a little dry run of Salt(vox and guitar), mind if i uploaded it(keep in mind it might not match your idea of the song)?

I like the way I said it better, but yeah... - Jim Morrison Impersonator in Waynes World 2
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« Reply #3 on: August 08, 2007, 11:11:00 PM »

Yeah mate upload away as I would LOVE to hear what you have done Smiley

Thanks so much for taking the time to have a look.
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« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2007, 01:16:37 PM »

Introspectively twisted.

I've said enough to last a lifetime; unfortunately for you I'm still not going to STFU.
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