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« on: December 08, 2007, 07:46:28 AM »

LIFE POSTPAID  - RECHARGED
A loner in the cosmos,
Reborn from the vibes of the universe…
The strength less rope of life that reigned
The moments of joy, and life never so winged!
Madness that you may call…
But a life better than the rise of the false!!
Living in light yet away from it….
In the darkness so well lit,
That we forgot the beauty of the black….

Living -, surviving and yet this small sense of “life” that we all lack.
Unknown notions and unspoken “virtues” that we all boast of…
Speeches of sacrifice and pleasures rendered at same breath,
Mulled in the celebrations of life and complications of death!!!
In the “darkness” of light I ask,
If this is living or survival in demention???
LIVING life is now a task….
Where simplicity is questioned.

A bond that has been renewed….
The innocence of living that went unused.
Curtains of illusions have now been cleared….
The dark blanket that I see,
Someday one with it I hope to be.
A thought so faint yet so bright!!
I LIVE IN THE MOMENT….
IN THE FRAGNANCES OF INCENSE SO DEAR…
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« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2007, 11:23:58 AM »

I like it. I like the reincarnation aspect of "Reborn from the vibes of the universe…"
and that the poem ends "IN THE MOMENT…."

So what do you think of Daniel?
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