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Salt
Of course we have salt
Where are the trees
The land is farmed
As far as the eye can see
The land is farmed
For you and me
The land is farmed
For money and greed
We think about it occasionally
Say the problems too small to see
Soon the salt of the land
Will meet the salt of the sea
Soon the salt of the land
Will meet the salt of the sea
Soon the salt of the land
Will meet the salt of the sea
Our Time Is Burning
Ooohhhh!
I am winter
But despite popular opinion
I’m the days that shine
When the clouds are gone
And the warmth comes thru
And you see straight thru me
And i’m naked with you
Even thought i’m clothed
I took so much care
I really wanted to know you
But i knew our time was burning
Once the spark is set
There’s only one way the flames are going
Just like my thoughts travelling below the belly
I couldn’t give you what you wanted
I haven’t got it for myself yet
But i know i should be in a hurry
For i know our time is burning
I wish i had told you so
I’m thinking as an old man
I wish 40 years ago
I just simply said hello
For now i know our time is burning
Ooohhhh!
Now spring is near
And all the moss is burning
Only my tears they receive
O Hurry that time is near
I cannot breathe the air no more
Our time is burning
It cannot last to Summer’s day
Oh and the poisons set
And i cannot fulfil
I am inept
Oh our time has just burnt through
That last flicker was a thought of you
Sunrise 6am
There’s a soft cotton sunrise
Leaving Perth behind
Clouds covering forgotten scars
The same thing we did on Mars
Colours are dreams on painters pallets
Golden pinks and scarlet chromes
I’m leavin’ home
I’m leavin’ home
The farmers leases
Look like jigsaw pieces
The clouds hide some
Breath taking view
Now golden sun
Famous Faces
Sitting here with famous faces
Don’t recognise some of them
Some have been in my dreams
Some inside my mind
It’s surreal
It’s sublime
Did I use these words correctly
I’m not too sure
You can make up your mind
I’m sitting here at this very point in time
Smiling, Smiling, Smiling
Because today I met
Zappa, Zorn, Barrett, Meek, Daniel Johnston
The Shags, Tim & Son, Oliver with the stepping stone
And certainly not last I found Faust
There’s many more V.I.Ps
This list was pulled randomly
If you want to learn
Have a real listen to these
Open your mind, transcend musically
This is talent not genius
It’s just most never get to see
See music, see it when it’s real
Most afraid there would be a tear
This list was pulled out randomly
From a source sub-consciously
Thanks for reading
